Jasper (Male)

[Jasper]

www.bbc.co.uk/nature/life/Ethiopian_Wolf

NAME. Jasper Killoca
AGE. 3
BiRTHDATE. Spring 2012
GENDER. Male 
SPECiES.  Ethiopian Wolf


PACK. Loner. Will create his own pack. (Good)
RANK. Loner

HEiGHT. 24 Inches
WEiGHT. 43 Pounds


PHYSiCAL DESCRiPTiON. Jasper has long ears. His tail is average for a wolf his species. His fur color is a reddish tan color, going down his entire back and face. His eyes are a muddy brown color. He has soft long fur. His fur being rough. His underbelly being completely white underneath, from neck to his tail tip. He has a rather long fluffy tail. His nose is the normal black. Jasper is not Slendy, nor bulky, but, in fact, average body weight. Jasper is rather muscular. He has no scars on his body, being unscratched. Thus, he is in excellent condition.

PERSONALiTY. Jasper is a leader. He does not follow. He instead leads other to the right path. Helps lead them to make the right decision. Jasper is all about honor and justice. He will follow the laws exactly. He will always fight with honor, and will refuse to fight a female, no matter what. He is extremely kind and will do anything to save another, even if it means risking his own life. He believes in a world of peace. He wants to create a perfect world, where everyone can live peacefully without need for fighting or arguing. He wants to unite all the packs and clans together. He will help anyone and everyone. He despises those who murder or kidnap others just for their own benefit. He will go to any length to stop them. Although, he will not kill them. He will come up with a different solution. He refuses to kill, no matter what they have done.

HiSTORY. Jasper was born into a facility, one that focused purely on breeding. The facility staff were desperate to breed the wolves. In fact, so desperate, that they began to Artificially Inseminate female wolves. The facility became focused on AI. Over 80% of wolves at the facility were impregnated by AI. Jasper grew up to hate this. He didn't think it was right. He wanted a world where wolves could breed on their own. Where wolves had a choice, but no. Where he lived, wolves had no choice in the matter. As soon as a female came into age, she were to be impregnated by Ai. Once Jasper came the age of 3, the rescue center, RRR was finally built and was ready to use. Jasper was sent to the rescue center. He was taken away from his mother, and god knows who his father was. Even his mother didn't know. Now, Jasper was all alone. He had nobody. He knew nobody. Jasper watched the other wolves. He wanted to protect them, to serve them. To make sure no harm came to them. Jasper wanted to be their guardian. He stayed at the rescue center,

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PENDiNG !

hello there! we're glad to have you here, but there are a few issues with your application. once they get resolved, i will be more than happy to accept Jasper!

first; none of his pictures (avatars, signature, etc.) have credits on them for the original owner. also, you state that the original owner of the picture is a username from another forum. most forums are not stock photo sites, and therefore the pictures located there may not actually belong to the user who posted them. it is not only against our site rules to use pictures without the owner's permission, it is illegal in real life (copyright infringement). there is a guide to finding stock photos located here that you can use to help you find some pictures that are available for use. please remove the pictures that you have currently, or find the owner and proof of permission to use, and/or replace the images with stock, along with proof of permission.

second; you state that Jasper is an Ethiopian Wolf, however, his pictures are of a coyote. they are very plainly a coyote, as Ethiopian Wolves and coyotes are far from similar in coloring. as coyotes are currently banned, Jasper is absolutely allowed to be an Ethiopian Wolf, but you must use a picture of his actual species to represent him. please find Ethiopian Wolf stock photos--feel free to use the guide i provided a link to above to do so--and use them, or change his species to another available species and find stock photos for that species to represent him.

third; his age doesn't match the current IC year. if he was born in Spring, 2011 (as all characters are born in Spring just to simplify the aging process), he would be 4 years old right now since the current IC year is 2015. you can either adjust his birth year, or his age, however you prefer to do it.

fourth; the height and weight listed for Jasper exceed the standards for the species. as told by this page on wikipedia, Ethiopian Wolves stand somewhere between 21 - 24 inches in height, and adult males weigh between 31 - 43 pounds. i would accept him being taller than average, and weigh more than average, but the max height and weight that would be within acceptable means is 26 inches and 50 pounds. please adjust his height and weight to better fit his species, or you can change his species to one that better suits what size you want for him.

fifth; Jasper's description doesn't really match his species coloring. it is stated that he is a muddy brown color, with lighter brown undersides. the Ethiopian Wolf has what's called 'red' fur, which is a bright reddish/tan color, with cream or white undersides and markings. please change his physical description to better suit his species, or change his species altogether to better fit his description. whichever you'd like.

sixth; the personality of your character is very one-sided. what we call a 'flat' character. this doesn't mean there's anything wrong--there can't be anything wrong with how you want your character to be--but we would like to ask for some more description of the other sides of him. what does he fear? how does he deal with love? does he believe in any kind of religion? i mean, you don't have to answer these specifically, they're just suggestions to help get the ball rollin'. if you could add a bit more about the other sides of Jasper, please.

seventh; in Jasper's history, you state that RRR (which i believe is Red Rock Rise {makes sense to abbreviate it as such, and i've done the same thing, just want to make sure we're on the same page}) is a rescue center, and that Jasper dreams to be released into the wild. Red Rock Rise is a massive (and i mean massive animal reserve, created to allow wild animals to thrive without human interference--specifically wolves, but others as well. it is enclosed by a fence, but it is literally thousands of square miles in space. in essence, it is the wild. i'm not sure if you misunderstood the plot, or meant to say something else and put RRR instead, but please adjust his history so that it fits.

once these issues are addressed, i would be happy to look back over Jasper's application.

if you have any questions, comments, or concerns, please feel free to send me a private message. thanks!